http://www.errorbar.net/rw/w/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=A_158_33 2026-06-23T23:49:42Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.35.13 http://www.errorbar.net/rw/w/index.php?title=A_158_33&diff=485&oldid=prev 2013-11-25T03:14:45Z

<p></p> <table class="diff diff-contentalign-left diff-editfont-monospace" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 03:14, 25 November 2013</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1" >Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>* {{PP|<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">159</del>|<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">6</del>}} &quot;I <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">knowit Cambry Senter ben flattent the werst of all the dead town senters </del>it <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">ben Zero Groun </del>it <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">ben where the wite shadderd stood up over every thing</del>&quot;</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>* {{PP|<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">158</ins>|<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">33</ins>}} &quot;I <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">fealt like that {{Ix|Power}} wer a Big Old Father I wantit </ins>it <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">to do me like Granser done Goodparley I wantit </ins>it <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">to come in to me hard and strong long and strong.  Let me be your boy, I thot</ins>&quot;</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">Given </del>the <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">small size </del>of <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">Kent </del>(<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">see [[places]]</del>), <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">it would seem unlikely that separate nuclear bombs </del>were <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">dropped on each </del>of the &quot;<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">dead towns&quot;; but Riddley has mentioned seeing white </del>{{Ix|<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">shadder|shadows</del>}} <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">in the other towns</del>, <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">which are only found near the heart of a blast.  Then again</del>, <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">we don't know how weapons might have advanced (so </del>to <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">speak) between the modern day and Bad Time</del>.</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">This is the first and only mention of a patriarchal god and </ins>the <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">idea is clearly a novelty to Riddley.  The Eusa Story does not include a Big Old Father, but Riddley's use </ins>of <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">{{Ix|capitalized words|capital letters}} is a sure sign that he means it in a religious sense </ins>(<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">like {{Ix|Power}}, {{Ix|number|No.}}, or {{Ix|Trubba}}</ins>)<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">Note that Riddley, Goodparley</ins>, <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">and Lissener all have fathers who </ins>were <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">killed: Riddley's by accident; Lissener's by Goodparley; Goodparley's by pirates, and his surrogate father by Goodparley.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">Also note the use </ins>of the <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">word </ins>&quot;{{Ix|<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">boy</ins>}},<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">&quot; more explicitly than earlier</ins>, to <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">refer to submissive sex</ins>.</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; 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Eli Bishop http://www.errorbar.net/rw/w/index.php?title=A_158_33&diff=483&oldid=prev 2013-11-25T03:13:18Z

<p>Created page with &quot;* {{PP|159|6}} &quot;I knowit Cambry Senter ben flattent the werst of all the dead town senters it ben Zero Groun it ben where the wite shadderd stood up over every thing&quot; Given th...&quot;</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>* {{PP|159|6}} &quot;I knowit Cambry Senter ben flattent the werst of all the dead town senters it ben Zero Groun it ben where the wite shadderd stood up over every thing&quot;<br /> Given the small size of Kent (see [[places]]), it would seem unlikely that separate nuclear bombs were dropped on each of the &quot;dead towns&quot;; but Riddley has mentioned seeing white {{Ix|shadder|shadows}} in the other towns, which are only found near the heart of a blast. Then again, we don't know how weapons might have advanced (so to speak) between the modern day and Bad Time.<br /> <br /> [[Category:Chapter 15]]</div>

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